作为一名优秀的人民教师,教学是我们的工作之一,对教学中的新发现可以写在教学反思中,那么优秀的教学反思是什么样的呢?
细细咀嚼课堂细节,静静聆听行家教诲,默默享受语文的每一份情怀,心里涌起的尽是感动。感动于学生的精彩表现,感动于领导的悉心指导,感动于同行们真挚的鼓励和鞭策。滴水瓣花总关情,点点滴滴在心头。
在此,我首先说一说在教学设计方面,自己感觉比较满意的地方:
(一)主问题设计得好,找到一个点,拉出一条线,辐射全文。
一直以来,我都坚持简简单单教语文,即目标求简明,过程求简要,引导求简练。在这一思想指导下,我把本课教学设定为两大主问题:说奇论妙。
主问题一——评说人物之奇,锻炼学生对文本的分析理解能力。聚焦文本内容,以一个“奇”字设疑,牵一发而动全身,引导学生沉入文本,抓住重点词句,从细节描写中感知刷子李之“奇”,学生很快找出刷子李三大奇特之处,即着装奇、规矩奇、技艺奇。
主问题二——品读文章之妙,锻炼学生对文法的揣摩思考,并学习作者的写作手法。这个问题对于我们班的学生甚至五年级的学生来说难度比较大。这个环节很困难,我用学法指导的形式呈现了三个小问题,引导学生凭借对小说布局谋篇的初步认识,凭借对曹小三内心世界的揣摩,体会“巧设悬念”和“一波三折”的写作手法。
(二)个别细节把握得比较好,延伸了语文的内涵
从冯骥才的《俗世奇人》中开课,引导学生读名家的书,经典的书,结课,又走进《俗世奇人》,引导学生由读一篇课文到读一整本书,使课堂显得很完整。
拓展部分让学生转换角色,采用记者采访的形式,讲述曹小三学徒头一天见到听到学到的。这不但让学生领略了全文的内容,而且领悟到人生的哲理。
结束语“我们每一个人手中都有一把神奇的刷子。我们也可以让手中的刷子给自己刷出一片神奇的天地。”堪称画龙点睛之笔。
美好的愿望不等于现实。纵观整堂课,带给大家更多的还是遗憾:
(一)文本内容的理解与表达形式的渗透没有达到完美的融合。整节课大部分时间都在默读、思考、交流,训练的仅仅是思维能力、语言表达能力。
(二)文中的精彩语句很多,但我仅品一个片段,不够全面,不够深入。课堂上只让学生简单读了读,没有在品字上下功夫,没有看到学生朗读水平的明显提升,没有达到预期效果。
(三)由于顾虑太多,以至于信心不足、不能灵活的驾驭课堂。面对学生一次次的回答,有时会紧张得不知说什么好。由此我深知自己经验之不足,在教学艺术上的领悟之浅薄。
(四)语言赏析还不够地道,这也是我备课时深感困惑的地方,如何让学生深刻体会文本津味语言特色,从而深刻解读带有天津烙印的刷子李的生命形态,挖掘人物背后的厚重的民俗文化意蕴。对这一点,我自觉只做到了蜻蜓点水。
学然后知不足,教然后知困。我深知自己在教学上还很稚嫩,远不及同行们之渊博厚重。执教《刷子李》,有亮点,有败笔,留给我更多的是对如何真正践行新课改精神的思索。再次感谢各位同行对我课堂的关注与批评,感谢你们给了我参照系,给了我反思力,让我们为演绎精彩语文而一路同行!
在教授《刷子李》这篇课文时,我深刻认识到语文教学不仅仅是知识的传授,更是对学生全面素质的培养。
首先,我注重培养学生的思维能力。在讲述刷子李的技艺时,我引导学生从多个角度进行思考,如刷子李的技艺是如何练成的、他的技艺对社会有何影响等。通过这种方式,学生的思维能力得到了锻炼和提高。
其次,我注重培养学生的审美能力。在讲述刷子李的人物形象时,我引导学生从外貌、语言、动作等方面进行分析,感受刷子李的。个性和魅力。通过这种方式,学生的审美能力得到了提高,也更加深入地理解了人物形象。
然而,我也发现自己在教学评价方面还有待改进。在教学过程中,我过于注重对学生的肯定和鼓励,而忽略了对学生的客观评价。在今后的教学中,我需要更加注重教学评价的公正性和客观性,确保每一个学生都能够得到公正的评价和指导。
《刷子李》是人教版小学五年级下册第七组课文中的第二篇课文,选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》。这是一篇略读课文,课文以“刷子李”高超的技艺为话题,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见的大本领,大智慧。本文生动趣味,故事一波三折,人物形象富有传奇色彩,是一篇艺术性和趣味性都较强的文章,很容易吸引学生阅读。
我在教学中紧紧抓住孩子们的'心,从而学习作者描述人物的方法呢?课中紧紧抓住一个“奇”字,让学生在“读”中晓“奇”,在“议”中悟“奇”,从种种“奇”中感悟刷子李的技艺高超。如,在引导学生感悟“刷子李”是一“奇”人时,引导学生从以下方面品味——“规矩奇”、“动作奇”、“效果奇”各体此刻哪些方面?
我把本课教学定为两大板块:聚焦文本资料,从细节描述中感知“技艺高超”;聚焦表达形式,在揣摩曹小三内心活动中感知“一波三折”。
不足之处:
对于学生的需要研究的不足,没有对教学资料进行了调整和取舍,重点突出的不明显。
改善措施:
要立足于学生,研究学生的需要,突出重点。
这是学生做的第一个电学分组实验,主要是为了巩固对串联电路和并联电路的电路特征的理解。同时培养学生连接电路的动手能力。它对学生认识串、并联电路特点,培养学生连接电路的技能有重要作用,必须创造条件,组织学生做这个实验,这将为今后进行电学分组实验,打下一个良好的基础。由于实验所需器材比较简单,取材也容易为了增加学生的视听效果,结果,学生操作兴趣高涨,整个课堂气氛比较活跃。
一、为了提高实验效果,我要求学生课前围绕以下几个问题进行了预习:
1、串联电路、并联电路连接的特点是什么?
2、为了防止接错,自己先拟订一个接线顺序,在接线过程中为什么开关应是断开的,并特别注意防止短路。
二、为了培养学生良好的点学实验习惯,在学生动手实验之前,我要求学生做到以下几点:
1、把实验桌上的器材与所做实验的电路图中的器材对照,检查器材是否够用。
2、搞清使用的电源是什么电源,分清电源的正、负极,弄清如何接线。
3、想一想,灯座、开关应如何连接?把导线接到接线柱上,导线应沿什么方向缠绕,旋紧螺帽时导线才不致被挤出来?
在实验操作过程中,我要求学生接好电路后,在闭合开关前,要对照电路图认真检查,闭合开关后,如出现故障,应立即切断电源,然后从电源的一个极出发,逐段检查原因。在实验过程中,既要强调独立思考,又要强调分工协作,培养学生的合作精神。实验后,要求学生整理好器材。
分组实验是培养学生操作技能和科学方法、态度、习惯的重要过程。本堂课,我充分发挥学生学习的主动性,激发他们的参与热情,给每个学生以同样的参与机会,增强学生学习兴趣和信心,让每个学生的能力和素质都得到提高,一堂课完整地按预定计划完成,也达到了预期目标。
三、这是学生做的第一个电学分组实验,学生在操作过程中还存在一些不足之处:
1、对于把导线接到接线柱上,导线应沿什么方向缠绕,旋紧螺帽时导线草不至于被挤出来,学生并没有深刻体会,部分学生操作没能按要求去操作,导致电路接触不良,影响了实验效果。
2、分学生连接好电路后,急于观察实验现象,没有进行必要的检查,就闭合了开关导致有短路现象的发生。
但是,我相信只要给学生更多的动手机会,学生的操作会更完美更美好,同时,我也会应课改的要求,日日充电,全面提升自己的综合能力,既要注意各种单项素质的训练和提高,有要着重于整体的效应,使各种能力相互促进,这样,教学过程会焕发出更强的生命力。
这篇课文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题。既为奇人,则轶事多多,但作者只选取一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧。
本文通俗易懂。教学时,我放手让学生根据阅读提示的要求自读课文。在学生充分自读课文的基础上,围绕“刷子李”的技艺高超表此刻哪里?作者是怎样写出他技艺高超的?有哪些描述最精彩的句子等问题交流讨论。
为帮忙学生真切地体会“刷子李”的技艺高超表此刻哪儿,我采用了:
(1)抓住直接描述“刷子李”刷墙的重点句段的情景。组织学生一句一句地读,边读边想象情景:刷墙时的动作好似跳舞,刷墙时发出的声音好似乐曲,完成的作品好似一面天衣无缝的屏障等。
(2)围绕学生感兴趣的问题集中讨论,如“他刷浆时,干完活黑衣服上为什么没有一个白点”,透过集中讨论,学生们取长补短,从而感受“刷子李的技艺高超。
优赛归来,细细咀嚼课堂细节,静静聆听行家教诲,默默享受语文的每一份情怀,心里涌起的是尽是感动。感动于华茂学生的精彩表现,感动于评委老师的充分的肯定,感动于同事和教研员一路伴我同行,感动于同行们真挚的鼓励和鞭策。滴水瓣花总关情,点点滴滴到心头。
有人说,“一堂好的语文课,存在三种境界:人在课中、课在人中,这是第一种佳境;人如其课、课如其人,这是第二种佳境;人即是课、课即是人,这是第三种佳境。境界越高,课的痕迹越淡,终至无痕。因此,课的最高境界乃是无课。杨聪的课该属第三佳境了吧,正如那来自生命深处的歌会,自然本色,妙于天成,设计大处泼墨、高屋建瓴,真有“推窗观天地,挥毫凌云烟”之气派,非我辈所能及。而反观自己的课堂,大有捉襟见肘之感,恰似一幅藏于深室的画一旦挂于本真自然面前,便黯然失色一般。这或许就是我的课堂的最大遗憾。诚然,我的课堂还远远未达到好课的最高境界,无法浑然天成。
我深知自己在教学上还很稚嫩,远不及赛友们之渊博厚重。我需要多请教,多探索,多实践,于是我在设计上下了功夫。从字词的预热、环境的把握、情节的切入、语言的品味、人物的解读到文本的感悟与拓展,无不留下我精心设计的心血。
我先是熟读文本,以至成诵。其间,发现了三个可以带动全文教学的点:一是文中用了52个“一”。细品之,我把它概括为“一个绰号藏奇绝”、“一个传说话奇绝”、“一段实录证奇绝”、“一袭黑衣衬奇绝”、“一手绝活写奇绝”、“一番教诲表奇绝”;二是文中几个跟黑衣白点的中心情节密切相关的`几个带“然”的词:“果然”——“居然”——“竟然”——“忽然”,另外,“悠然”这个词也能充分体现人物的性格和境界;三是人物的双重解读,即人生意义上的人物解读和文化意义上的人物解读。
在设置教学环节时,我时刻谨记“以生为本”,“贴着学生教”,一切的教学环节都以学生的学情为设计的起点。
整体教学设计便基于此展开。其中,选择以曹小三的口吻来复述的方法以期达到一石三鸟的效果:进一步领会情节一波三折之魅力;深刻感受曹小三心理之变化、刷子李之奇绝;在学生的个性解读中深入体会本色、津味之语言特色。
于是,我感受到了语文课堂的美!那始终盈于课堂的融融的对话氛围、那含于同学眼中的真挚与热切,那精彩纷呈、张扬个性的多元解读、那默默流淌在师生心头的审美的河流,所有这一切,都澎湃着生命的情感,拍打着语言的浪花,溅射出耀眼的光芒!
真的,只要你给学生一方土壤,学生就会绽放出最绚丽的花朵,只要你给学生一把“刷子”,学生便会舞出无限的精彩!我至今难忘那艳惊全场的天津快板,感谢那位用天津话即兴演绎的同学,让我们领略了不曾预约的美丽!或许有同 我是地道的金华人,未曾去过天津,亦不会天津快板,更无能力指导演绎这么精彩的快板。这位同学的这一特长,为我的课堂增添了色彩,这可以说是我莫大的幸运。
然而,静心思之,这堂课在“三个维度”——温度(教师情感的温热度)、广度(在主题的范围内旁延扩展)、深度(语文性、情感性和思想性的深刻和恒久)的体现上,明显地感到了广度和深度的不足!我也曾想用结尾的人物系列来弥补这一点,然而正如专家点评,这“只是对课文的一个延伸”,“给课堂起到水到渠成的作用,让课堂就此结束”,“未关注刷子李们的苦难生活”。是的,课堂因此没有生命的超级震撼力,也就没有好课应有的高度而流于平庸!拓宽备课视野,深化文本处理和加强课堂的厚重感是我急需补的课程!
此外,语言赏析还不够地道,这也是我备课时深感困惑的地方,如何让学生深刻体会文本津味语言特色,从而深刻解读带有天津烙印的刷子李的生命形态,挖掘人物背后的厚重的民俗文化意蕴。对这一点,我自觉只做到了蜻蜓点水。
执教《刷子李》,有亮点,有败笔,留给我更多的是对如何真正践行新课改精神的思索。再次感谢各位同行对我课堂的关注与批评,感谢你们给了我参照系,给了我反思力,让我们为演绎精彩语文而一路同行!
《刷子李》选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》。这篇短文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题,作者只选择一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领,大智慧。一个技艺高超的刷子李的形象栩栩如生地立在可我们的眼前,课文内容曲折有趣,吸引学生,为了更好的感受人物形象,我主要关注了以下这两个方面。
一、注重诵读,感知文章风格
课文《刷子李》语言朴素,具有浓郁的“天津”风味,并且幽默传神,极富表现力,无论是人物语言,还是叙述语言,均情趣盎然,简洁传神。因此,在教学中我积极引导学生根据文中情境进行诵读,首先,学生自读,读准字音,读通句子,明确课文主要讲什么。然后找出重点句段由师生共同揣摩品味,并有教师范读其中的一二段。最后分角色朗读,按人物语言、叙述语言引导学生朗读。总之,采用多种方式引导学生反复诵读文章,让学生在读中感知文章的意境和风格,感受人物形象。
二、品味词句,领悟语言美
本课的语言、动作描写具有个性化,体现了小人物的大智慧。对于文 组织学生一句一句地品,边读边想象情景:刷墙时的动作好似跳舞,刷墙时发出的声音好似乐曲,完成的作品好似一面天衣无缝的屏障等。(2)围绕学生感兴趣的问题集中讨论,如“他刷浆时,干完活黑衣服上为什么没有一个白点”,通过集中讨论,学生们取长补短,从而感受“刷子李的技艺高超。
本篇课文生字词较多,预习显得尤为重要。课文内容时代久远,很难引起学生的兴趣,必须让学生充分了解臧克家和闻一多的生平,在此基础上才能深入挖掘文章的内涵。
朗读的效果较好,通过朗读,让学生很好的把握了人物的品格和精神。
本文语言生动形象,精练含蓄,富于感情和音乐美。但对于初一的学生来说,把握起来难度较大,所以本课设计了圈点批注的环节,让学生自己去感悟、品味,并通过讨论、交流来提高学生的阅读水平,同时为学生留出自由选择学习内容和感受自己独到的阅读体验的空间,有利于学生自主探究,体现个性化阅读。
在拓展延伸部分,安排了一道将课文内容与实际生活相联系的讨论题,目的是锻炼学生的思考能力和口头表达能力。学生发言比想象中的还要踊跃,不断有新的亮点产生,把这堂课的气氛推向高潮,充分调动了学生的主观能动性。
课文中的一些书籍学生平时较少接触,了解的东西少,所以在第二节课时就比较难上。我就将该部分的内容转为请同学讲讲自己看过的,记忆深刻的书或一篇文章。这样一变学生的热情就来了,一改刚才死气沉沉的状态纷纷举手发言,有的甚至自己站起来抢着向同学叙述自己所看到的精彩的内容。
有描述樱桃小丸子的任性,有的则描述蜡笔小新的调皮淘气,有的描绘了一幅美丽的山水景色,有的则描述自己家里的可爱的小猫小狗……我看了这样的情形不禁暗暗高兴,不按已定的教案来上课那也是很好的,最重要的是要在课堂上激起学生学习的兴趣,而不能只为了完成教学任务。
虽然没有完成教学任务,但我在另一个方面上激起了学生学习兴趣,促进他们进行课外阅读,并能够将自己所读到的文章说出来与大家共享。这就在不同程度上体现了《课标》中“注重情感体验,有较丰富的积累,形成良好的语感”这个目标。
但课后还要多引导学生去阅读,特别是阅读一些名著,加深他们的文学修养。像中国的四大名著,文言文较多,学生看起来较难懂,可以先引导他们去读读简单的儿童版,然后再引导他们读读原著,这就可以加深他们对内容的理解。
片段作文训练是为组织学生开展读书心得交流活动做好准备的,有的同学就做得很好,能够及时的完成,而有的同学却没有完成。从中可以看出有完成的同学是有所思考的去读书,读过之后才有所得;没有完成的同学可能是没有去看什么书或者是看了却没有思考结果是写不出来。看来,不仅要引导同学去阅读,更要教他们如何阅读,读后应做什么。
不足之处:在课堂的导入方面相对来说较难,如第一课时的导入可以换成俗语或谜语来导入如:千层宝典一翻开,黑白纵横一排排。历代往事它记载,知识没它传不开。(请打一物)谜底为书。而第二课时则可以用同学们没积累到的有关书的名言来导入。
这篇课文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题。既为奇人,则轶事多多,但作者只选取一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧。
1.本文通俗易懂。教学时,我放手让学生根据阅读提示的要求自读课文。在学生充分自读课文的基础上,围绕“刷子李”的技艺高超表此刻哪里?作者是怎样写出他技艺高超的?有哪些描述最精彩的句子等问题交流讨论。
2.为帮忙学生真切地体会“刷子李”的技艺高超表此刻哪儿,我采用了(1)抓住直接描述“刷子李”刷墙的重点句段的情景。组织学生一句一句地读,边读边想象情景:刷墙时的`动作好似跳舞,刷墙时发出的声音好似乐曲,完成的作品好似一面天衣无缝的屏障等。(2)围绕学生感兴趣的问题集中讨论,如“他刷浆时,干完活黑衣服上为什么没有一个白点”,透过集中讨论,学生们取长补短,从而感受“刷子李的技艺高超。
3.拓展:读读与本文相似的文章,如《泥人张》、《快手刘》等。
这一课的重点是z、c、s的发音与zi、ci、si的整体认读以及认识5个生字,而我上的这堂课的课时目标是学会zi、ci、si 3个整体认读音节及它们的四声;认读5个生字,会读儿歌。在教学过程中激发学生主动参与课堂学习的热情,感受学习与劳动的快乐。
在教学整体认读音节时,通过“戴帽子”游戏,让学生轻松地掌握其四声。然而不足之处颇多:1、由于常规训练不到位,教师花费太多时间于维持课堂纪律,导致课堂任务没完成;2、四声的表掉学习应该先明确标调方法再请学生上讲台标出声调;3、整体认读音节的学习应该与声母相比较以加深学生的印象。4、在讲解发音技巧时,可多采用几种比较直观形象的方法,让学生轻松愉快地学习;4、多给时间让学生读,多种形式的读;5.在看图说话环节,是让学生拼拼音说话而不是让学生猜也不是靠教师引导,而是拼出来。
教师应该多研读教材,看透教参,做到心中有教材。在教学环节的设计上应该更富于趣味性。一年级的学生,注意力不能长时间集中,需要教师运用生动有趣的教学环节来吸引学生的注意力。课中休息做游戏环节,可将学习内容融合到游戏之中,使学生在休息游戏时也能学到或巩固知识,寓学于玩,激发学习兴趣。
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这是一篇略读课文,课文通俗易懂。教学时,首先我放手让学生根据课文前“连接语”的要求自读课文。在学生充分自读思考的基础上,师生围绕“刷子李”的技艺高超表现在哪儿,作家是怎样写出他技艺高超的,有哪些描写最精彩的句子等问题交流讨论。最后整理小结,若有可能,再读读与本文相似的,如,《泥人张》《快手刘》。
许多学生对粉刷不太了解。因此,很难真切地体会“刷子李”的技艺高超表现在哪儿。这是教学的难点,这一难点不突破,不仅很难感受“刷子李”这一人物形象,而且也不可能去体会作家的写法。为帮助学生真切地体会“刷子李”的技艺高超表现在哪儿,我通过抓住直接描写“刷子李”刷墙的重点句段,引导学生深入体会。如,第5自然段,这一段比较集中地描写了“刷子李”刷墙的情景。教学时,我组织学生一句一句地读,边读边想象情景,读后交流感受。再是围绕学生感兴趣的问题集中讨论,如,“他刷浆时,干完活黑衣服上为什么没有一个白点”,通过集中讨论,学生之间取长补短,从而感受“刷子李”的技艺高超。
冯骥才笔下的此类俗世奇人还有许多,阅读本文后,可以补充冯骥才的同类,如,《泥人张》《快手刘》,供学生自由阅读。补充同类给学生阅读,既有利于学生加深对这类人物的感受,又扩大了学生的视野,便于学生较全面地体会作家描写人物的方法。
有人说,“一堂好的语文课,存在三种境界:人在课中、课在人中,这是第一种佳境;人如其课、课如其人,这是第二种佳境;人即是课、课即是人,这是第三种佳境。境界越高,课的痕迹越淡,终至无痕。因此,课的最高境界乃是无课。杨聪的课该属第三佳境了吧,正如那来自生命深处的歌会,自然本色,妙于天成,设计大处泼墨、高屋建瓴,真有“推窗观天地,挥毫凌云烟”之气派,非我辈所能及。而反观自己的课堂,大有捉襟见肘之感,恰似一幅藏于深室的画一旦挂于本真自然面前,便黯然失色一般。这或许就是我的课堂的最大遗憾。诚然,我的课堂还远远未达到好课的最高境界,无法浑然天成。
我深知自己在教学上还很稚嫩,远不及赛友们之渊博厚重。我需要多请教,多探索,多实践,于是我在设计上下了功夫。从字词的预热、环境的把握、情节的切入、语言的品味、人物的解读到文本的感悟与拓展,无不留下我精心设计的心血。
我先是熟读文本,以至成诵。其间,发现了三个可以带动全文教学的点:一是文中用了52个“一”。细品之,我把它概括为“一个绰号藏奇绝”、“一个传说话奇绝”、“一段实录证奇绝”、“一袭黑衣衬奇绝”、“一手绝活写奇绝”、“一番教诲表奇绝”;二是文中几个跟黑衣白点的中心情节密切相关的几个带“然”的词:“果然”——“居然”——“竟然”——“忽然”,另外,“悠然”这个词也能充分体现人物的性格和境界;三是人物的双重解读,即人生意义上的人物解读和文化意义上的人物解读。
在设置教学环节时,我时刻谨记“以生为本”,“贴着学生教”,一切的教学环节都以学生的学情为设计的起点。
整体教学设计便基于此展开。其中,选择以曹小三的口吻来复述的方法以期达到一石三鸟的效果:进一步领会情节一波三折之魅力;深刻感受曹小三心理之变化、刷子李之奇绝;在学生的个性解读中深入体会本色、津味之语言特色。
于是,我感受到了语文课堂的美!那始终盈于课堂的融融的对话氛围、那含于同学眼中的真挚与热切,那精彩纷呈、张扬个性的多元解读、那默默流淌在师生心头的审美的河流,所有这一切,都澎湃着生命的情感,拍打着语言的浪花,溅射出耀眼的光芒!
真的,只要你给学生一方土壤,学生就会绽放出最绚丽的花朵,只要你给学生一把“刷子”,学生便会舞出无限的精彩!我至今难忘那艳惊全场的天津快板,感谢那位用天津话即兴演绎的同学,让我们领略了不曾预约的美丽!或许有同 我是地道的金华人,未曾去过天津,亦不会天津快板,更无能力指导演绎这么精彩的快板。这位同学的这一特长,为我的课堂增添了色彩,这可以说是我莫大的幸运。
然而,静心思之,这堂课在“三个维度”——温度(教师情感的温热度)、广度(在主题的范围内旁延扩展)、深度(语文性、情感性和思想性的深刻和恒久)的体现上,明显地感到了广度和深度的不足!我也曾想用结尾的人物系列来弥补这一点,然而正如专家点评,这“只是对课文的一个延伸”,“给课堂起到水到渠成的作用,让课堂就此结束”,“未关注刷子李们的苦难生活”。是的,课堂因此没有生命的超级震撼力,也就没有好课应有的高度而流于平庸!拓宽备课视野,深化文本处理和加强课堂的厚重感是我急需补的课程!
此外,语言赏析还不够地道,这也是我备课时深感困惑的。地方,如何让学生深刻体会文本津味语言特色,从而深刻解读带有天津烙印的刷子李的生命形态,挖掘人物背后的厚重的民俗文化意蕴。对这一点,我自觉只做到了蜻蜓点水。
执教《刷子李》,有亮点,有败笔,留给我更多的是对如何真正践行新课改精神的思索。再次感谢各位同行对我课堂的关注与批评,感谢你们给了我参照系,给了我反思力,让我们为演绎精彩语文而一路同行!
正确定位略读课文教学价值取向。
《刷子李》是人教版五年级下册的一篇略读课文。略读课文的教学是有别于精读课文的教学的。小学略读课文教学的目的,是引导学生运用精读课文阅读实践中习得的方法策略,进行半独立或独立阅读实践,从而真正学会阅读、享受阅读。但是,当下略读课文仍然存在两个突出的问题:一是教师对略读课文教学不够重视,课堂教学目标不明确,没有精心的预设,更谈不上阅读策略的指导,教学的随意性较大。二是把略读课文当作精读课文来处理,进行“精讲细教”。课文有什么就教什么,涉及到的语文知识全面关注,导致教学内容过多过散,语文课上教师教得很累,学生负担过重,但教学效率却不明显。所以,对略读课文的教学价值取向要有个正确的定位,这样在教学内容的取舍、教学流程的设计、教学策略与方法的选择上,才能做到合乎法度。
精研文本,选择合适的教学内容。
《刷子李》一文选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》,是一篇写人的文章。作者围绕刷子李的粉刷技艺高超,借一件极富戏剧性的小事来管窥故事人物的大本事大智慧。本文语言幽默传神,极富表现力,具有浓郁的“天津风味”。在塑造人物技艺高超的形象时,作者非常注重细节的描写。对曹小三一波三折的心理过程的描写,让读者也跟着曹小三的心理变化感受了一把刷子李刷墙的高超技艺。本文可供选择的教学的内容其实挺多,需要教师合理地进行取舍,不可一味贪多贪全,面面俱到。经过深入地研读文本,教者确定课堂核心教学内容是重点引导学生深入研读赏析,体会冯骥才小说巧设悬念,编织“一波三折”的故事情节,体会语言表达之美。
拓展阅读,巧妙迁移阅读方法
《语文课程标准》指出:“语文课程应注重引导学生多读书、多积累,重视语言文字运用的实践,在实践中领悟文化内涵和语文应用规律。”学生阅读能力的提高是要在阅读的实践中习得的。学生经过亲身实践获得的知识更有价值,因为这是一种主动建构的知识,是有意义的生命体验。在课堂上,学生在阅读的实践中,在教师的引导下感悟了《刷子李》一文故事情节跌宕起伏,一波三折,感受了作者语言表达的魅力。但教者并没有停步于此,而是拓展阅读《泥人张》,迁移阅读的方法,感受《泥人张》在故事情节设计上的异曲同工之妙。这样学生通过方法的迁移,学以致用,获得美感熏陶,提高思辨能力、赏析能力。经过以一篇带一篇,更是激起了学生阅读《俗世奇人》这本书的兴趣,实现从一篇到一本的教学效果。
本文选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》。“刷子李”普普通通,却有“俗世奇人”之美称。首先是“俗世”中的“凡人”,因为他是生活于市井里巷的凡夫俗子,是一位普普通通的手艺人;可他又是“俗世”中的“奇人”,因为他刷墙的技艺高超,让“行外的没见过的不信,行内的生气愣说不信”。他有才能、有个性,喜怒哀乐样样俱全,但行事言语又高于常人,所以,用“俗世奇人”
这篇短文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题。既为奇人,则轶事多多,但作者只选择一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧。作者写“刷子李”的奇妙绝活时,首先极力写他手艺之高,“他要是给您刷好一间屋子,屋里什么都不用放,单坐着,就如同升天一般美。最让人叫绝的是,他刷浆时必穿一身黑,干完活,身上绝没有一个白点。”这是在与自己挑战?还是以特立独行显示自己的超凡出众?但不管怎么写,这样写却吊起了读者的胃口。然后作者从一个小徒弟的视角印证了“刷子李”的真功夫:起初,徒弟是“半信半疑”,但大半天下来,居然连一个芝麻大的粉点也没发现,他真觉得这身黑色的衣服有种神圣不可侵犯的威严。正当徒弟对师傅佩服得五体投地时,却突然发现“刷子李”裤子上有一个白点:师傅那如山般的形象轰然倒去。不料“刷子李”最后揭开谜底:那白点原来是黑裤烧了个小洞造成的!一波三折的叙事,使“刷子李”的'“奇”得到了一次次的渲染,紧紧抓住了读者,起到了引人入胜的艺术效果。
细节描写对于塑造人物个性起到了重要作用。作这是课文在写法上的一个显著的特点。文中“刷子李”的黑衣黑裤,刷墙时娴熟优美的的动作,如同完成一件工艺品。还有那个让人吃了一惊的白点等细节描写都使“刷子李”这个人物活了,神了。为了烘托人物的形象,文中也采用了对比的手法:“刷子李”大胆的“承诺”,充满自信,豪气千丈,同时又心细如发,对于小徒弟细微的内心活动体察入微,充分表达了作者对“刷子李”这个具有超凡技艺的“奇人”由衷的赞叹和肯定。
另外,本文的语言朴素,具有浓郁的“天津”风味,并且幽默传神,极富表现力,让学生在朗读中充分体会。课后,我又补充《快手刘》、《泥人张》两篇文章让学生感受作者对这些平凡普通的手艺人奇异的绝活细致刻画,感受他们独特的个性魅力,从中明白熟能生巧的道理。
1、《刷子李》选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》。这是一篇精读课文,课文以“刷子李”高超的技艺为话题,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧。我在教学中紧紧抓住一个“奇”字,让学生在“读”中晓“奇”,在“议”中悟“奇”,从种种“奇”中感悟刷子李的高超技艺。如,在引导学生感悟“刷子李”是一个“奇”人时,先引导学生品味“规矩奇”“动作奇”“效果奇”各体现在哪些方面?
2、我把本课教学定为两大板块:聚焦文本资料,从细节描述中感知“技艺高超”;聚焦表达形式,在揣摩曹小三内心活动中感知“一波三折”。我始终思考学生的需要,立足于学生的发展,对教学资料进行了整合,重点突出,条理清晰,学生学得兴趣盎然。“心里有文本,眼里有学生”这样的教学设计就应是可行的、有效的。
3、本课中我渗透了阅读方法的指导,教学生运用阅读《刷子李》的方法读《泥人张》《快手刘》,激发学生爱上《俗世奇人》这本书,进而爱上阅读,让阅� 群文阅读给学生一个“快乐的课堂”,把阅读的自主权还给学生,教师仅仅是学生的引导者、陪伴者,突出学生的主体地位,让学生快乐地阅读、快乐地交流、快乐地分享。
在教授《刷子李》这篇课文时,我注重了学生对文本的理解和感悟。通过让学生反复朗读课文,他们逐渐感受到了刷子李高超的技艺和独特的性格。然而,在教学过程中,我也发现了一些问题。首先,部分学生在理解刷子李的性格特点时,还停留在表面,没有深入挖掘其背后的深层含义。因此,在今后的。教学中,我需要更加注重引导学生深入理解文本,培养他们的思维能力和分析能力。
此外,我也发现自己在课堂上的提问方式还有待改进。有些问题过于简单,无法激发学生的学习兴趣;而有些问题又过于复杂,导致学生难以回答。因此,我需要更加精心设计问题,使之既具有启发性,又符合学生的认知水平。
最后,我认为在教学过程中,我还需要更加注重学生的情感体验。通过让学生扮演角色、朗读课文等方式,让他们更加深入地感受到刷子李的技艺和性格,从而培养他们的审美能力和人文素养。
今天上午,我和学生共同学习了《刷子李》这篇课文,上课的时候我内心觉得很充实,因为学生听得很认真,回答问题也很积极。
这篇文章的作者是冯骥才,课文描写了一个刷墙师傅高超的技艺,内容简单易懂。刷子李刷浆的时候,总是会穿一套黑衣服。而且还给自己立下规矩:只要身上有白点,白刷不要钱。
这是篇略读课文,我引导学生紧扣文前导读来阅读本篇课文,“刷子李”技艺高超表现在哪里?学生准确地找到了“但刷子划过屋顶,立时匀匀实实一道白,白得透亮,白得清爽。”等相关句子。
最后我把教学的重点放在了引导孩子做人的教育上,其实语文教学重点就是引导孩子在日常生活中如何做人做事,所以我把一大部分时间放在最后的谈论环节,�
一是他比较看重真本事,因为他告诉曹小三说“好好学本事吧。”
二是他很自信,他告诉所有人如果他的黑衣服上沾上了白点,他就不要一分钱,这样一来很多家粉刷房子都会找他,如果有白点就不用掏钱了。
三是他肯定很刻苦,我们现实生活中看到过很多粉刷匠,他们的衣服上都是一个一个的小白点,而刷子李刷完一整套房子,黑衣服上一个白点也没有,就说明他的功夫深,他能做得这么好肯定是下了很多功夫的,所以这样他也会成功。
四是他心态很好,刷墙的时候手臂摆来摆去,悠然自得,在刷墙时他的心里一定很宁静,开心,心情很放松,所以才会做得这么好。
在逐渐地分析中,学生明白了一个成功人士应该具备的本质,我想那些想成功的孩子,日后一定会潜移默化地向刷子李学习的。
教学目标
1、读通读顺课文,在具体语境中理解“蘸浆”“匀匀实实、悠然”等词语的意思。
2、着眼全文,研读重点句子,丰富“刷子李”的形象。
3、梳理曹小三心理变化的线索,把握课文主要内容,初步了解描写人物的方法。
4、激发学生阅读冯骥才《俗世奇人》的兴趣,课外继续走进作家笔下的人物。
教学重难点
1、有感情地朗读文中描写最精彩的句子,丰富“刷子李”的形象;
2、梳理曹小三心理变化的线索,把握课文主要内容,初步了解描写人物的方法。
教学过程
一、直接导入,学新式称呼
1、齐读课题《刷子李》,导入新课。
2、这是人们送给他的一个特别的称呼,猜猜他是干什么的?
3、了解称呼由来。
4、举一反三助称呼理解。
咱班谁写字最漂亮?写字(姓氏)
谁跑步最快?跑步(姓氏)
谁的朗读水平最高?读书(姓氏)
二、初读感知,品正面描写
(一)初读课文,检查词语朗读。
1、过渡:想要学好语文,读好书非常重要,下面就请同学们自由、大声朗读读文,注意读准字音,读通句子,难读的地方多读几遍,读顺课文。思考:这篇文章有几个人物?他们之间什么关系?读完以后身体坐正示意老师。
2、学生交流汇报。(板书:曹小三、师、徒)
3、检查读词。
(1)这篇文章比较长,有很多难读的词语,我来考考大家,请看,这组词你会读吗?
师傅包袱芝麻规矩露馅儿较劲儿
①生读,师正音。
②你觉得哪个字的书写需要注意一下?相机指导书写:傅、袱、馅
(2)第二组词又来了,谁来挑战?
蘸浆稀溜溜匀匀实实和着琴音
生读,师正音。(关注:蘸、匀、和)
(二)指导朗读,体会人物正面描写的方法
1、读好词也要读好句。出示句子:
①屋顶尤其难刷,蘸了稀溜溜粉浆的板刷往上一举,谁能一滴不掉?一掉准在身上。可刷子李一举刷子,就像没有蘸浆。
②刷子划过屋顶,立时匀匀实实一道白,白得透亮,白得清爽。
③只见师傅的手臂悠然摆来,悠然摆去,如同伴着鼓点,和着琴音,每一摆刷,那长长的带浆的毛刷便在墙面啪地清脆一响,极是好听。啪啪声里一道道浆,衔接得天衣无缝,刷过去的墙面,真好比平平整整打开一面雪白的屏障。
生读,师朗读指导。
2、这时候如果让你在“刷子李”这三个字前面加上一个词,你会加什么词呢?
指名回答。(生可以上台板书)
3、总结写法,引出“正面描写”。
三、梳理心情,学侧面描写
1、过渡:我们刚才感受到了刷子李高超的刷墙技艺,他的徒弟曹小三一开始就相信了吗?
指名回答。(师相机板书:半信半疑)
2、通读课文,画出描写曹小三心理变化的句子。
指名回答。
PPT出示相应句子。
(1)自由读
(2)你体会到什么?(板书:佩服)
(3)居然?给你什么感觉?文章哪一段也写了事情出乎曹小三的意料?(第七段)
出示:当刷子李刷完……出现一个白点
(1)齐读
(2)刚刚还对师傅佩服的五体投地,转眼间,在曹小三的心目中,师傅的形象——(轰然倒地)此时曹小三的心情是多么失望啊!(板书:失望)
(3)那事实真的像曹小三想的那样吗?
不是,是烟洞(板书:敬佩)
曹小三的心情就像坐了过山车(板书画出曲线),真是一波三折啊!
3、谁能用你的朗读,读好这三个字,读出曹小三的心情。
PPT出示:
(1)一开始曹小三半信半疑时:(刷子李)
(2)当曹小三在师傅的黑衣上找不到一个芝麻大小的粉点时:(刷子李)
(3)当曹小三在师傅裤子发现一个黄豆大小的白点时:(刷子李)
(4)当曹小三明白了白点原来是师傅抽烟时烧的小洞时:(刷子李)
自己读,同桌读——指名读(师引读)——指名加标点读——加语气词全班齐读。
4、此时此刻你想送给刷子李哪个词?或者送一句话,一个符号。
5、总结写法,引出侧面描写。(板书:侧面描写)
四、课堂延伸,探俗世奇人
1、今天我们认识了技艺神奇的“刷子李”。
这里还有很多“奇”人等着我们去认识呢!(PPT出示刷子李、泥人张、好嘴杨巴等)
他们都在冯骥才先生的《俗世奇人》里。赶快去读一读吧!
2、布置作业:
(1)摘抄你觉得这篇文章有意思的语段。
(2)推荐阅读《俗世奇人》(PPT出示作业)
教学反思
五年级下学期的学生,对于人物描写的方法已经有了初步认识,本文内容一波三折,趣味十足,课堂教学设计以读书引导为主,感受对人物的正面描写,通过梳理曹小三心理变化的线索,学习正侧面结合的人物描写方法。
在《刷子李》这篇课文的教学中,我注重了培养学生的阅读能力和分析能力。通过让学生自主阅读课文,并回答相关问题,他们逐渐掌握了阅读的方法和技巧。然而,在教学过程中,我也发现了一些需要改进的地方。
首先,我意识到自己在课堂上的'引导还不够到位。有时候,学生提出了很好的问题或者观点,但我没有及时给予充分的肯定和引导,导致学生的积极性受到了影响。因此,我需要更加注重课堂互动,及时给予学生反馈和鼓励。
其次,我发现部分学生在理解课文时存在困难。这可能与他们的阅读能力有关,也可能与我对课文的讲解不够深入有关。因此,我需要更加注重因材施教,针对不同学生的实际情况采取不同的教学方法和策略。
最后,我认为在教学过程中,我还需要更加注重培养学生的创新思维和批判性思维。通过引导学生从不同角度思考问题、提出自己的见解等方式,培养他们的独立思考能力和创新精神。
《刷子李》是一片略读课文,总体来说,上这篇文章的思路还是很清晰的,我主要从两个问题切入,引导学生进行自读自悟,分别是:这个人为什么叫刷子李?他奇在哪?
透过竺老师的点评,有以下几点思考。我受启发最大的是小练笔部分。原先自己设想的是让学生练笔说一说曹小三在听完师父的话后表达决心,但是这样的练笔设计得有些浅,所以修改后的教案,我将练笔部分分成两个,一个是练说,说一说能够分我两个部分,一是练说部分,练说部分能够问:同学们,此时此刻,应对这样一位身怀绝技的二师父,曹小三想说什么?他会怎样向父亲表态呢?
二是练笔部分练说说决心,练笔结合课文最后一句,先齐读,最后让他们写写自己明白了什么,这样不仅仅提升了文章的高度,也能让孩子从文中受到一些道理的启示和启发。为了这个练笔,能够在分析课文的时候就将一些感悟渗透到文本的理解和分析上。如刷子李刷的规矩齐,师能够问:为什么要定下这样一个奇特的规矩(因为太累,多了,肯定受不了,不贪多,保证质量最重要。)又如在理解匀匀实实部分,师能够问:为什么能刷得那么严严实实?引导学生说出轻重均匀,速度快,蘸得不多不少,为什么能够做到呢,主要是平时的刻苦练习和研磨,让学生认识到平时积累的重要性。
另外,要更加重视朗读方面的训练,仍要重视抓住关键词的方法多加指导,要更加重视,个性要抓住关键字进行朗读的训练;还要重视评价,用不同的、准确的评价性语言来研究学生的回答,这也是自己以后需要努力的。
语文是一门搞笑的学科,因为语文课文包含了各种搞笑的知识。其中刷子李就是我们喜欢的一篇课文。在那里,我们学大语文教师,就针对课文的学
本课是一篇略读课文,紧紧抓住课前阅读提示进行组织教学的,“熟读课文,想想‘刷子李’的技艺高超表此刻哪儿,作家冯骥才又是怎样写出他技艺高超的。再把描述最精彩的句子找出来,读一读,体会一下表达的效果。”
在熟读课文的基础上,学生很快地找出了第5自然段,作者透过动作和效果描述,较好的表现了刷子李高超的技艺。学生透过再三再四地读和体会揣摩,理解了刷子李粉刷墙壁如艺术创作,艺术表演一样,那样出神入化、娴熟的技艺,令人惊叹,令人称奇道妙。
于是,从“情景”、“效果”这两个正面感受刷子李的高超技艺后,我抛出了一个问题:“作者为什么还要安排曹小三呢是不是剩余的呢”带着这个问题,学生再去浏览课文,划出曹小三的相关语句,填一填描述他心理活动的词语,学生发现作者安排“曹小三”这个人物有着特殊的含义,对主要人物起衬托作用,穿针引线和见证者的作用,这样文章的写作手法也就表现出来了,实现了人文性与工具性的统一。
这是一篇略读课文,课文以刷子李高超的技艺为话题,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领,大智慧。略读课文是精读课文的有机延伸,是将精读学习所习得的方法进行实践运用。但这是赛课,跳跃性上的,前面精读课文人物描写一组的学习铺垫为零,缺少略读课文教学应有的连贯性和系统性,怎么办?考虑再三,我决定借助单元阅读导读,让学生提早接触单元训练重点,从整体上去把握作家刻画人物的方法。另外,努力把握好教学方法上的粗放。略读课文只有一课时,因此决不能求全求深,抓住一点,一课一得就可以。可是该课应抓哪一点,要练习挖掘把握到什么程度,怎样的教学算是明显区别于精读课文?我深深陷入了迷茫和困惑中。
拜读完《略读课文,今天怎么教》,朱文君、王菘舟等名师专家的《对小学略读课文教学的实践与思考》,心中似乎有了一点底气,于是有了第一次试教:以第一自然段教学为支点,串起散落在文章多个语段中的教学点,通过自读体会、比较阅读、动作体验、角色换位等手段,引领学生走进文本,体会刷子李的技艺高超。课后,回首一望,课堂上,每个语言点又是感悟又是体验,面面俱到,怎么上着上着,居然比精读课文还精读?以至于拖堂十分钟!单从时间上看,这是一个失败的设计,一时又感到无比的迷茫。
鉴于略读课文是精读课文的有机延伸,是将精读学习所习得的方法进行实践运用,几经思索,另起炉灶,教学时我有意侧重于学法的指导和运用,像正面描写、侧面描写、一波三折等习作术语一一灌输给学生,希望一口吃成一个大胖子。结果一节课下来,课堂气氛凝重,一点也没有文本语言特有的风趣与幽默,学生学得很不轻松。略读课文到底该怎么上?忽左忽右怎么行?!我该精讲什么,略去什么?取舍如何把握?这篇课文应让学生学到什么?我再次走进教学的深谷,找不到出路。
痛定思痛,破茧重生。经过两次试教,经过同教研组老师的共同分析和探讨,他们给我指明方向――简洁是智慧的灵魂,即目标求简明,过程求简要,引导求简练。在这一思想指导下,我把本课教学定为两大板块:聚焦文本内容,从细节描写中感知技艺高超
聚焦表达形式,在揣摩曹小三内心活动中感知一波三折。本设计,始终考虑学生的需要,立足于学生的发展,对教学内容进行了调整和取舍,重点突出,条理清晰,学生学得兴趣盎然。这些收获,使我意识到:心里有文本,眼里有学生。这样的教学设计应该是可行的、有效的。
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《刷子李》是一篇略读课文,课文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题。既为奇人,则轶事多多,但作者只选择一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧。去年10月,到杭州参加语文教研组长培训活动,以往听过特级教师虞大明上过这节课,他以一个“奇”字,“奇”在何处?一石激起千层浪。引导学生沉入文本,潜心涵咏。抓好重点词,课堂资料来自语言,课堂操作落实语言,课堂细节敲打语言。他又引导学生凭借对曹小三内心世界的揣摩,凭借对小说布局谋篇的初步认识,体会“一波三折”的`写作手法。他是大师级的,我自然无法让自我的课堂到达他的境界。当然,我也还记得在听完他的课后汪潮教授的点评指导,他说略读课文是精读课文的有机延伸,是将精读学习所习得的方法进行实践运用。是半独立阅读的课文,主要培养学生独立阅读的本事和方法,要减少教师的设问和牵引,要更多的放手让学生独立阅读课文,不应当把略读课文当成精读课文来上。
于是我把这堂课定位为“简洁是智慧的灵魂”,即目标求简明,过程求简要,引导求简练。在这一思想指导下,我把本课教学定为两大板块:聚焦文本资料,从细节描述中感知“技艺高超”;聚焦表达形式,在揣摩曹小三内心活动中感知“一波三折”。本设计,始终研究学生的需要,立足于学生的发展,对教学资料进行了调整和取舍,重点突出,条理清晰,学生学得兴趣盎然。
课堂是一门缺憾的艺术,这节课也不例外,课堂上语言赏析还不够地道,这也是我备课时深感困惑的地方,如何让学生深刻体会文本津味语言特色,从而深刻解读带有天津烙印的刷子李的生命形态,挖掘人物背后的厚重的民俗文化意蕴。对这一点,我自觉只做到了蜻蜓点水。
细细咀嚼课堂细节,静静聆听教研员教诲,默默享受语文的每一份情怀。在这天上完《刷子李》这篇课文后,我反思如下:
《刷子李》是一篇略读课文,课文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题。既为奇人,则轶事多多,但作者只选取一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧。所以我以一个“奇”字,“奇”在何处引导学生进入文本,潜心涵咏。抓好重点词句是学习这篇课文最好的方法,因为课堂资料来自语言,课堂操作落实语言,课堂细节敲打语言。因此我抓住直接描述“刷子李”刷墙的重点句段的情景,组织学生一句一句地读,边读边想象情景,来体会“刷子李”神奇。之后,我又引导学生凭借对曹小三内心世界的揣摩,凭借对小说布局谋篇的初步认识,体会“一波三折”的写作手法。学生在老师的带领下思路敏捷,完成学习任务也就干脆多了。
课堂是一门缺憾的艺术,这节课也不例外。聆听了教研员的评后,收获颇多:
1、在课堂上语言赏析还不够,比如:句子“他要是给您刷好一间屋子,屋里什么都不用放,单坐着,就如同升天一般美。”在学生理解完这句话体现了刷子李的技艺高超后,应再引导学生想想这句话用了什么修辞手法,学生不难答出是“夸张”。还有几句,也应引导学生自己去体会用了什么修辞手法。这说明我钻研教材还不够深入,以后上课前就应反复研读教材。
2、没有充分发挥学生的主体作用,老师讲得多,没有完全放手给学生。这是一篇略读课文,“刷子李的奇表此刻哪些方面”“作者是采用什么样的方法来描绘刷子李的奇的”等一系列问题的提出,能够充分让学生透过讨论、合作、交流共同完成学习任务。既能锻炼了学生的思维潜力、语言表达潜力、分析问题和解决问题的潜力,同时,学生的思想觉悟也得到了很大的提高。但我在这方面做得还不够,总包办的太多,这是我今后要注意的一点。
执教《刷子李》,有亮点,有败笔。再次感谢教研员的肯定和批评,感谢你们给了我参照系,给了我反思力。我将
习惯于睡前打坐冥想,以平复纷繁的心绪。年处的意外,打乱了我生活的节奏,100多天来,床头的思虑中混杂了默默静思每天语文教学的每一份情怀的沉浮,心里总不时涌起全然的真挚感动。感动于有时学生在课堂上的精彩表现,感动于年级组老师的充分的肯定和提点,感动于好友和知己在忧郁时一路伴我同行,感动于同行们真挚的鼓励和鞭策。滴水瓣花总关情,点点滴滴到心头。
有人说,一堂好的语文课,存在三种境界:人在课中,课在人中,这是第一种佳境;人如其课,课如其人,这是第二种佳境;人即是课,课即是人,这是第三种佳境。境界越高,课的痕迹越淡,终至无痕。因此,课的最高境界乃是无课。许多的老师终生的追求该是难以企及的第三佳境吧正如那来自生命深处的歌会,自然本色,妙于天成,设计大处泼墨,高屋建瓴,真有推窗观天地,挥毫凌云烟之气派,仿若神雕侠侣中独孤求败已如登峰造极之境,非我辈所能及。而反观自己的课堂,大有捉襟见肘之感,恰似一幅藏于深室的画一旦挂于本真自然面前,便黯然失色一般。这或许就是我的课堂的最大遗憾。诚然,我的课堂还远远未达到好课的最高境界,无法浑然天成。
我深知自己在教学上还很稚嫩,远不及同年级组的前辈们之渊博厚重。需要多请教,多探索,多实践,于是我在设计上下了功夫。从字词的预热,环境的把握,情节的切入,语言的品味,人物的解读到文本的感悟与拓展,无不留下我胶尽脑汁的心血历程。
《刷子李》本是为了五年级组的教研课所准备,却不料被郑老师否决了。但出于对这个故事设计的欣赏,希望能和班上的63个孩子分享我阅读时的情绪,准备教学这个内容前,我格外的用心。
我先是熟读文本,以至成诵。其间,发现了三个可以带动全文教学的点:一是文中用了52个一。细品之,我把它概括为一个绰号藏奇绝,一个传说话奇绝,一段实录证奇绝,一袭黑衣衬奇绝,一手绝活写奇绝,一番教诲表奇绝;二是文中几个跟黑衣白点的中心情节密切相关的几个带然的词:果然——居然——竟然——忽然,另外,悠然这个词也能充分体现人物的性格和境界;三是人物的双重解读,即人生意义上的人物解读和文化意义上的人物解读。
在设置教学环节时,我时刻谨记以生为本,贴着学生教,一切的'教学环节都以学生的学情为设计的起点。
整体教学设计便基于此展开。其中,选择以曹小三的口吻来复述的方法以期达到一石三鸟的效果:进一步领会情节一波三折之魅力;深刻感受曹小三心理之变化,刷子李之奇绝;在学生的个性解读中深入体会本色,津味之语言特色。
于是,我感受到了语文课堂的美!那始终盈于课堂的融融的对话氛围,那含于同学眼中的真挚与热切,那精彩纷呈,张扬个性的多元解读,那默默流淌在师生心头的审美的河流,所有这一切,都澎湃着生命的情感,拍打着语言的浪花,溅射出耀眼的光芒!
真的,只要你给学生一方土壤,学生就会绽放出最绚丽的花朵,只要你给学生一把刷子,学生便会舞出无限的精彩!我至今难忘那艳惊全场的天津快板,感谢那段用天津话即兴演绎的音频,让我们从流畅的谚语中领略了不曾预约的绽放在上个世纪的美丽!找寻这段快板的材料,还得感谢于一位网上认识的至交好友,千辛万苦的搜索和思量后,选择的这段材料给课堂带来了亮点。任何华丽的辞藻,铺张的修饰都不及真实的体验能感动人心。它为我的课堂增添了色彩,孩子们是真心实意的对当时的天津卫产生了兴趣,这可以说是我莫大的幸运。